Thursday, February 5, 2009

Kaylin's not the Only One

Hi Everybody

I need some serious help. As I've been writing my paper, I have been told (many times) that my attention getter does not get attention. This is true, and I need some serious help.

My Topic is How Story and Symphony are big parts of each other
Here's a link to my Wiki:

Just go to the Rough Draft to see what I have so far.




annes said...

What if you had music videos? One of a great musical piece and one that is definitely not symphonic.

lsadler2012 said...

John C. I love your thesis and the only thing that I think would improve your paper would be to maybe make it more dynamic. Add videos, pictures, and eye other eye catching material. Your doing a great job so far!